Comments on mix

Hey all, I just knocked up a 16 second clip to use as my ring tone. A little overkill, but if anyone would like to give me some feedback on the mix, it would be much appreciated.

What's it sound like through a 3 mm speaker?

My guess is that this mix won't rock on a cell phone. Tedwood is right: It has to be good sounding on a tiny cell phone speaker. Shogger

It actually sounds as good as I could expect. It's obiously midrangy as anything, but the leads sound good, the kick, snare and toms all come through quite good and at a good level. Apart from the intro, the bass guitar completely disappears behind the guitars, but at the same time it doesn't become a mess. How would you guys have mixed it differently?